Draft of Endorsement Essay
Aug. 21st, 2007 12:02 amSo, the second draft of my Endorsement Essay is finished. I'm going to go over it again tomorrow, fix the introduction and the conclusion, see if it needs more polishing, and put it in the mail to the seminary and my candidacy committee (it's due September 1). But I thought I'd post it here first, to see if you guys had any critiques/comments. The specifications for the essay are here.
( The Essay )
ETA: edited and sent in the mail, thanks for your help!